Throughout this process, I paid close attention to keeping a good flow even though these sections were written separately. Still, when I combined these sections I made some slight changes to the word use, to make it sound clearer and have it flow better. As far as my audience, I wanted to provide some information to give some background knowledge, but I didnt want to become over bearing in that I would know everything-because I dont. I feel kind of uncomfrotable through this process because I have no experience in this subject. And yet, if I publish, it will be read by experienced people in this field. who knows what theyll say about my work. i wouldnt like it if that bashed a whole semesters worth of work. still, i feel pretty good when they were combined. I think the results and data will be the most difficult to accomplish. and i definatley think once i finish that part, itll help me revise these first three parts
